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There are some today who Nould argue that the internet has svlficiently siplant ed the role of tradtlional education as to make it redundant.

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IELTS essay There are some today who Nould argue that the internet has svlficiently siplant ed the role of tradtlional education as to make it redundant.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
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