Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

There a lot of advantages of studying abroad.

There a lot of advantages of studying abroad. One of the most important advantages is that it leads to students to learn about new cultures and people in foreign countries where they go. While they go to a foreign country for their academic career, they must meet new friends in courses or schools. Moreover, they will experience the conversation with a lot of people such as teachers, bakers, or marketers in daily life. For example, if one student goes abroad to study during the semester, he has to communicate with foreign people because they must meet his classmates or roommates. Therefore, studying abroad provides the chance in developing our perspectives about the people in the world. The second advantage of studying abroad is that students who study abroad can gain an opportunity to enhance their language skills. They can do several exercises to improve their foreign languages with their foreign friends. For example, if students want to ask friends something, they need to contact them. Therefore, it improves the foreign language. It is a magnificent chance for students who want to increase their foreign tongues. In conclusion, it is clear that due to the pros it offers, overseas studying should absolutely be considered as a choice for students.
It seems that a verb is missing.
There
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
advantages of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
. One of the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
advantages is that it leads to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to learn about new cultures and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
countries where they go. While they go to a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
country for their academic career, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
new friends in courses or schools.
Moreover
, they will experience the conversation with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
such as teachers, bakers, or marketers in daily life.
For example
, if one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
goes
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
to study during the semester, he
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
has to
communicate with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
his classmates or roommates.
Therefore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
provides the chance in developing our
The usual preposition for “perspectives” is “on”, not “about”.
perspectives about
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in the world. The second advantage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
who study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
can gain an opportunity to enhance their language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. They can do several exercises to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
languages with their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
friends.
For example
, if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
want to ask friends something, they need to contact them.
Therefore
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
language. It is a magnificent chance for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
who want to increase their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
tongues.
In conclusion
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that due to the pros it offers, overseas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studying
should
absolutely
be considered
as a choice for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay There a lot of advantages of studying abroad.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
208 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts