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The world would be a much poorer place without colour. To what extent would you agree or disagree

The world would be a much poorer place without colour. To what extent would you agree or disagree n2J2
Colors play a very important role in our lives. I certainly agree with the notion that world would be a much poorer and boring place without color. In following paragraphs, I would put forth some points to support my opinion. Colors depict liveliness in every object living or non-living. Take an example of any art piece – a painting or rangoli. Colors in the painting give a multi-dimensional effect to it and make it lively. Even a flower vase in a living room makes our sitting areas more pleasant and refreshes our mind and souls. Moreover, nature also reflects its seasonal changes through colors. The leaves become yellow and dry at the onset of summer whereas on the contrary they become green at the onset of monsoon season. The rainbow that is formed during the rainy season and the colorful butterflies that we see in our gardens is the testimony that our nature is enriched with hues that cannot escape from a human eye. All these visual effects would have gone unnoticed had there been no change of colors in the surroundings. In India, people celebrate Holi as festival of colors. The sole intent of this festival is to create awareness that a human being’s life should be as colorful as these colors. The colors symbolize the different shades, phases of our lives and celebrating them implies to enjoy every phase with equal importance in our life. Indians know the significance of colors and believe that every color has a different meaning. For example, green is considered to be color of prosperity, white the color of peace, purity, calm, red the color of vibrancy, festivity and so on. Colors also hold its importance in different human rituals across the globe. For example, in some religion black is worn at funerals and white is the color worn during weddings. Thus, even our forefathers believed in the fact that colors reflect our mindsets and that they should be associated with life changing events. To put it in a nutshell, all these situations vividly explain how colors impact our psychological well-being and make the world a beautiful place to exist. It would be very depressing to imagine a monochromatic life otherwise in absence of colors.
Colors play a
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agree
with the notion that world would be a much poorer and boring place without
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color
. In following paragraphs, I would put forth
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points to support my opinion.

Colors depict liveliness in every object living or non-living. Take an example of any art piece
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a painting or
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rangoli
. Colors in the painting give a multi-dimensional effect to it and
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make
it lively. Even a flower vase in a living room
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makes
our sitting areas more pleasant and refreshes our mind and souls.
Moreover
, nature
also
reflects its seasonal
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changes
through colors. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leaves
become yellow and dry at the onset of summer whereas
on the contrary
they become green at the onset of monsoon season. The rainbow that
is formed
during the rainy season and the colorful butterflies that we
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see
in our gardens is the testimony that our nature
is enriched
with hues that cannot escape from a human eye. All these visual effects would have gone unnoticed had there been no
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change
of colors in the surroundings.

In India,
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people
celebrate
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Holi
as festival of colors. The sole intent of this festival is to create awareness that a human being’s
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life
should be as colorful as these colors. The colors symbolize the
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different
shades, phases of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
and celebrating them implies to enjoy every phase with equal importance in our
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life
. Indians know the significance of colors and believe that every
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color
has a
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different
meaning.
For example
, green
is considered
to be
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color
of prosperity, white the
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color
of peace, purity, calm, red the
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color
of vibrancy, festivity and
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so
on.

Colors
also
hold its importance in
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different
human rituals across the globe.
For example
, in
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some
religion black
is worn
at funerals and white is the
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color
worn during weddings.
Thus
, even our forefathers believed in the fact that colors reflect our mindsets and that they should
be associated
with
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life
changing
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events
.

To put it in a nutshell, all these situations
vividly
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explain
how colors impact our psychological well-being and
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make
the world a
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beautiful
place to exist. It would be
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very
depressing to imagine a monochromatic
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life
otherwise
in absence of colors.
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IELTS essay The world would be a much poorer place without colour. To what extent would you agree or disagree

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
372 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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