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The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, the Hollywood film industry is exhibiting a huge influence on cinema companies around the globe. Public authorities must fund their own film companies to conserve and develop their culture. I strongly agree with this statement. Acting is an art, in order to protect and develop their culture, every government must take actions to develop and improve the quality of their own country movies. Firstly, Hollywood movies are more attractive and advanced. The movies from US are well known for the modern technology they use and the knowledgeable story they have. For example, Interstellar is an American movie, which beautifully depict the space and the time dimensions. By watching that movie people will definitely fall for the attractive structure of the stars they show and the theory they used as a main plot of the movie. This will not only impress the people who watch the movie, but also make them aware of scientific theories. By this way they influence the whole cinema industry in the world to make more interesting as well as innovative films. Secondly, Investing more on film industry helps the people who work on film companies and also the countries culture. On one hand, spending more money on cinema will greatly help the employers who work on making the movie. This will help countries economy by eliminating unemployment. On the other hand making more films which explains the culture of a specific country will assist in protecting their culture and let future generations know about their culture thereby developing it. To conclude, though American movies influence the film industry all over the world, there is no negative effects in that.
Nowadays, the Hollywood film
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is exhibiting a huge influence on cinema
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companies
around the globe. Public authorities
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must
fund their
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film
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companies
to conserve and develop their
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culture
. I
strongly
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agree
with this statement. Acting is an art, in order to protect and develop their
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culture
, every
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government
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must
take actions to develop and
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improve
the quality of their
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own
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country
movies.

Firstly
, Hollywood
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movies
are more attractive and advanced. The
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movies
from US are well known for the modern technology they
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use
and the knowledgeable story they have.
For example
, Interstellar is an American
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movie
, which
beautifully
depict the space and the time dimensions. By watching that
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movie
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people
will definitely fall for the attractive structure of the stars they
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show
and the theory they
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used
as a main plot of the
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movie
. This will not
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only
impress the
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people
who
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watch
the
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movie
,
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but
also
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make
them aware of scientific theories. By this way they influence the whole cinema
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industry
in the world to
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make
more interesting
as well
as innovative films.

Secondly
, Investing more on film
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industry
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helps
the
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people
who work on film
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companies
and
also
the
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countries
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culture
. On one hand, spending more money on cinema will
greatly
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help
the employers who work on making the
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movie
. This will
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help
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countries
economy by eliminating unemployment.
On the other hand
making more films which
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explains
the
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culture
of a specific
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country
will assist in protecting their
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culture
and
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let
future generations know about their
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culture
thereby developing it.

To conclude
, though American
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movies
influence the film
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industry
all over the world, there is no
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negative
effects in that.
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IELTS essay The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. with this statement?

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