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Some people argue that public should be allowed to have guns. Disscuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Nowadays, people's life has no safety. Having this point as priority a group of people opine that public should have the right to use guns. This essay will discuss the merits anf demerits of handling gun by public in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, considering guns as a safety equipments, which protect the people from getting harm from others. To elucidate further, especially for women use gum to get confidence to figjt against the criminals. For instance, the women welfare association revealed that 95% of women getting abused either in the form of physical assault such as rape or mental torture when they are alone. Yet, if they have safety measures like gum they fight against them. Therefore, if they give a license to use gum they can protect themselves from these menace. On the other hand, having gun with the public may lead to a perilous situation to the society. To explain it further, which may increase the number of culprits and crimes. Because, individual misuse the gun like a toy whenever and wherever they need. For exampke, the BBC news reported that, in Italy, a school teacher were shooted by a group of people for no reason. Therefore, giving gun creats trouble some situation to the entire society. To recapitulate, the usage of gun by public ensure the safety of the women whereas, which increases the nber of unwanted crimes drastically. There fore, gun must be provided only to the reputed people like police to save the nation.
Nowadays,
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people
's life has no
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safety
. Having this point as priority a group of
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people
opine that
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public
should have the right to
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use
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guns
. This essay will discuss the merits
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demerits of handling
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gun
by
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public
in the following paragraphs.

On the one hand, considering
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guns
as a
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safety
equipments, which protect the
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people
from getting harm from others. To elucidate
further
,
especially
for
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women
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use
gum to
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get
confidence to
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figjt
against the criminals.
For instance
, the
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women
welfare association revealed that 95% of
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women
getting abused either in the form of physical assault such as rape or mental torture when they are alone.
Yet
, if they have
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safety
measures like gum they fight against them.
Therefore
, if they give a license to
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use
gum they can protect themselves from these menace.

On the other hand
, having
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gun
with the
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public
may lead to a perilous situation to the society. To
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it
further
, which may increase the number of culprits and crimes.
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Because
, individual misuse the
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gun
like a toy whenever and wherever they need. For
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exampke
, the BBC news reported that, in Italy, a school teacher were
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shooted
by a group of
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people
for no reason.
Therefore
, giving
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gun
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creats
trouble
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some
situation to the entire society.

To recapitulate, the usage of
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gun
by
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public
ensure the
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safety
of the
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women
whereas, which increases the
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nber
of unwanted crimes
drastically
.
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There fore
,
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gun
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must
be provided
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only
to the reputed
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people
like police to save the nation.
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IELTS essay Some people argue that public should be allowed to have guns. Disscuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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