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The trend of reading offense books and watching thriller shows on television is increasing in many parts of the world day by day.

The trend of reading offense books and watching thriller shows on television is increasing in many parts of the world day by day. ljDAw
The trend of reading offense books and watching thriller shows on television is increasing in many parts of the world day by day. In this essay, I narrate the reason for the growing public demand for those books and dramas with including my opinion on these matters. A recent census operates by BBC in different countries has shown that people spend there much more time reading crime books and watching TV dramas. Publication company is earning huge amount of money ever than before and the TV channel owners are encouraged making a lot of thriller movies to consider the enhancing public interest. Whenever a new fiction book or drama introduce in the marketplace or on the web, the sales and the views both are enlarging rapidly. Traditional TV shows fully depend on the romantic-based story and it does not portray our real scenario of society. In contrast, in my country, there are a lot of contaminated things in every sector that makes the people distressing and frustrating. By the thriller shows a man can relate himself with the negative aspect of society which is the prior reason to increase the favor of such kind of story among the public. I enjoy watching fiction show because it makes me feel enthusiastic when some awful situation occurs and the police or defense person saves the hazard to make the day comfortable. To sum up, considering above I think people love to see themselves as a part of the story sometimes that may harsh reality. That’s why fiction show and story remaining popular day by day.
The trend of reading offense
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books
and watching thriller
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shows
on television is increasing in
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many
parts of the world day by day. In this essay, I narrate the reason for the growing public demand for those
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books
and dramas with including my opinion on these matters.

A recent census operates by BBC in
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different
countries has shown that
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people
spend there much more time reading crime
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books
and watching TV dramas. Publication
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company
is earning huge amount of money
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than
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before
and the TV channel owners
are encouraged
making
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a lot of
thriller movies to consider the enhancing public interest. Whenever a new fiction
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book
or drama introduce in the marketplace or on the web, the sales and the views both are enlarging
rapidly
.

Traditional TV
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shows
fully
depend on the romantic-based
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story
and it does not portray our real scenario of society.
In contrast
, in my country, there are
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a lot of
contaminated things in every sector that
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makes
the
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people
distressing and frustrating. By the thriller
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shows
a
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man
can relate himself with the
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negative
aspect of society which is the prior reason to increase the favor of such kind of
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story
among the public.

I enjoy watching fiction
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show
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because
it
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makes
me feel enthusiastic when
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some
awful situation occurs and the police or defense person saves the hazard to
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make
the day comfortable.

To sum up, considering above I
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think
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people
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themselves as a part of the
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story
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sometimes
that
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may harsh
reality. That’s why fiction
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and
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remaining popular day by day.
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IELTS essay The trend of reading offense books and watching thriller shows on television is increasing in many parts of the world day by day.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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