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The three graphs of wheat exports each show a quite different pattern between1985 and 1990. Exports from Australia declined over the five-year period, while the Canada market fluctuated considerably, and the European Community showed an increase.

The three graphs of wheat exports each show a quite different pattern between1985 and 1990. Exports from Australia declined over the five-year period, while the Canada market fluctuated considerably, and the European Community showed an increase. 0ByMB
The line graph illustrates the distinctions in international wheat trade over three different zones between 1985 and 1990. the wheat export rates of the European Community showed a stedy rise over the period, while the percentage of exported wheat in Canada experienced stability after a remarkable fluctuation. The figure of Australia's export decreased gradually. in 1985, Australia exported 15 million tones of wheat, that increased to 16 million next year. But it declined slowly to 11 millions in 1990. Over the same period, the amount of Canada's export was unpredictable. It started at 19 million, falling to about 17 million in 1986. Export rate reached its peak 25 million in 1988, then it reduced dramatically to 14 million next year. After that, it improved steadily to its first rate in 1990. The European Community started at 17 million, dropping slightly subsequent year. Export figure stabilized after showing a minimal rise. Subsequently, it went up moderately to 21 million in 1990. It is noticeable that the rate of wheat export was lower in Australia than the other two areas.
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in Canada experienced stability after a remarkable fluctuation. The figure of Australia's
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, that increased to 16
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was lower in Australia than the other two areas.
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IELTS essay The three graphs of wheat exports each show a quite different pattern between1985 and 1990. Exports from Australia declined over the five-year period, while the Canada market fluctuated considerably, and the European Community showed an increase.

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