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The threat of nuclear power maintains world piece. It provides clean and cheap energy. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

The threat of nuclear power maintains world piece. It provides clean and cheap energy. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages? jRYAy
Nuclear power generation is very prominent for the world peace maintenance, additionally, low price and pure energy is produced by it. There are numerous merits as well as demerits of it. However, I believe that latter outweighs the former and my viewpoints will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, there are enormous benefits of nuclear power energy. Firstly, it is cost- effective although needs high initial cost to build this, it is relatively cheap to produce to energy from them as they have low operating costs unlike another sources of energy such as solar energy and wind energy. Secondly, one of the biggest advantage of nuclear energy is that it is reliable power generation source. Some other options like solar and wind energy which need the sun and wind to be shining and blowing respectively, nuclear power can be generated at any time time throughout the clock. This means, a nuclear power plant can produce energy nonstop without any delays. On the contrary, there are ample number of drawbacks exists along with advantages. Primarily, it has a great impact on the environment although it does ot create any emissions, it does produce radioactive waste that is incredibly dangerous because there is no way to destroy nuclear waste as this is non biodegradable. Secondarily, security threat is also present in it and it is more prone to nuclear accidents. It is powered by nuclear energy. Terrorists might target nuclear power plants with the intention of creating a disaster and people working there died as a result of the long term effects of the radiation and some time it happens due to the negligence of individual as it required more precautions. To conclude, although prone of nuclear power generation in terms of cost-effectiveness and reliability are legitimate, yet its cons such as environmental damage as well as nuclear accidents are way more considerable.
Nuclear
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generation is
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prominent for the world peace maintenance,
additionally
, low price and pure
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energy
is produced
by it. There are numerous merits
as well
as demerits of it.
However
, I believe that latter outweighs the former and my viewpoints will
be discussed
in the upcoming paragraphs. To
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begin
with, there are enormous benefits of nuclear
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power
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energy
.
Firstly
, it
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relatively
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cheap
to produce to
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energy
from them as they have low operating costs unlike another sources of
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energy
such as solar
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energy
and wind
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energy
.
Secondly
, one of the biggest advantage of nuclear
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energy
is that it is reliable
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power
generation source.
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Some
other options like solar and wind
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which need the sun and wind to be shining and blowing
respectively
, nuclear
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power
can
be generated
at any
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time time
throughout the clock. This means, a nuclear
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power
plant can produce
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energy
nonstop without any delays.
On the contrary
, there are ample number of drawbacks exists along with advantages.
Primarily
, it has a great impact on the environment although it does
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create any emissions, it does produce radioactive waste
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dangerous
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because
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destroy
nuclear waste as this is
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non biodegradable
.
Secondarily
, security threat is
also
present in it and it is more prone to nuclear accidents. It
is powered
by nuclear
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energy
. Terrorists might target nuclear
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power
plants with the intention of creating a disaster and
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people
working there
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died
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some
time it happens due to the negligence of individual as it required more precautions.
To conclude
, although prone of nuclear
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generation in terms of cost-effectiveness and reliability are legitimate,
yet
its cons such as environmental damage
as well
as nuclear accidents are way more considerable.
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IELTS essay The threat of nuclear power maintains world piece. It provides clean and cheap energy. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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