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The third world War would be fought because of water to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The third world War would be fought because of water ggw3
In current era each and every nation trying their best effort to provide world-class facilities such as food, shelter, Healthcare and water to their citizen. In such scenario scarcity of water would be reason. But, it is not a dominant one. Thus, i am not accord with writers' notion that lack of water would be a reason for world War 3 and reasons for my inclination are glanced through in an ensuing paragraphs. To commence with, First and perhaps most important reason behind world War 3 seems to that each and every country wheter, it is developing or developed would like to become a super power with supreme monarchy by spreading threat in the world via doing nuclear experiments. Eventhough, it is creat negative impact on neighboring countries. Forexample, North Korea and South Korea. In addition, countries like China using biological weapon by spreading covid19 virus trying to slowdown the economical growth of compitative countries. Second of all, some countries which are engaged in criminal activities and encourage drugs scandal, making violent games, try to spread chaos and anarchy by this they spoiling the career of the youth might be a reason for world War 3. To elaborate it further, take an example of invention of pubg and blue whale game. However, world might be passes from problem of water scarcity in near future as the use of this non renewable resource is rampant. But, the scholar scientist of the world and scientific development research centre spending thousands of dollars to invent revolutionary technologies because of this in this era of technological development reuse of water would be possible. up to some extent scientist get the success as well in this field too. For instance, recent survey held by government of Singapore reveals that new technogical water purifier successfully curb the water scarcity problem of their country. By invention of this water purifier singapore declared that all the waste water can easily purify with water purifier and it can reuse easily. By this, I mean that water scarcity would not be reason for world War 3. I concede that both the paragraphs have significant importance and logic; however, I am firmly disagree with the notion that, future battel is due to lack of available water resources. Contarary, burning issue across the globe is terrorism now a days every country is facing a problem of terrorist attacks and some countries like Pakistan encourage this kind of activities would be a reason for world War3. In conclusion, by analyzing aforementioned points it is aptly clear that world War 3 would be result of race towards gaining power, prestige, and prominent position across the globe.
In
current
era each and every nation trying their best effort to provide world-
class
facilities such as food, shelter, Healthcare and
water
to their citizen. In such scenario
scarcity
of
water
would be
reason
.
But
, it is not a dominant one.
Thus
,
i
am not accord with writers' notion that lack of
water
would be a
reason
for
world
War
3 and
reasons
for my inclination
are glanced
through in an ensuing
paragraphs
.

To commence with,
First
and perhaps most
important
reason
behind
world
War
3 seems to that each and every
country
wheter
, it is developing or developed would like to become a super power with supreme monarchy by spreading threat in the
world
via doing nuclear experiments.
Eventhough
, it is
creat
negative
impact on neighboring
countries
.
Forexample
, North Korea and South Korea.
In addition
,
countries
like China using biological weapon by spreading
covid19
virus trying to slowdown the
economical
growth of
compitative
countries
. Second of all,
some
countries
which
are engaged
in criminal activities and encourage drugs scandal, making violent games, try to spread chaos and anarchy by this
they spoiling
the career of the youth might be a
reason
for
world
War
3. To elaborate it
further
, take an example of invention of
pubg
and blue whale game.

However
,
world
might be passes from problem of
water
scarcity
in near future as the
use
of this
non renewable
resource is rampant.
But
, the scholar scientist of the
world
and scientific development research
centre
spending thousands of dollars to invent revolutionary technologies
because of this
in this era of technological development reuse of
water
would be possible.
up
to
some
extent scientist
get
the success
as well
in this field too.
For instance
, recent survey held by
government
of Singapore reveals that new
technogical
water
purifier
successfully
curb the
water
scarcity
problem of their
country
. By invention of this
water
purifier
singapore
declared that all the waste
water
can
easily
purify with
water
purifier and it can reuse
easily
. By this, I mean that
water
scarcity
would not be
reason
for
world
War
3.

I concede that both the paragraphs have significant importance and logic;
however
, I am
firmly
disagree
with the notion that, future
battel
is due to lack of available
water
resources.
Contarary
, burning issue across the globe is terrorism
now a days
every
country
is facing a problem of terrorist attacks and
some
countries
like Pakistan encourage this kind of activities would be a
reason
for
world
War3.

In conclusion
, by analyzing aforementioned points it is
aptly
clear
that
world
War
3 would be result of race towards gaining power, prestige, and prominent position across the globe.
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IELTS essay The third world War would be fought because of water

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5 paragraphs
442 words
6.0
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