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The text talks about the creatures named arthropods that have lived on sea and offers three ways to explain how they had lived.

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The text talks about the creatures named arthropods that have lived on sea and offers three ways to explain how they had lived. The professor casts doubt on the mentioned ways, categorically refutes them one by one. First, the passage put forward the idea that the arthropods were hunter swimmers creatures and they have been feed on smaller organism found in the ocean. The lecturer, On the other hand, refutes this idea, elaborating that other type of arthropods have a well developed eye sight, But the primary species of arthropods lack such eye sight and vison to track their pray and chase them. othervise they sould have other sensors to detect and follow their prays but there was not any evidence on their fossils. Second, the author in the passage demonstate that they may have lived on the seafloor. In sharp contrast to what mentioned, the speaker professes that the other organis dwelled on the sea floor have stayed on the local part of their breeding place, feeding on remaing parts of other organisms and are not able to go far or fast. Nevertheless, the arthropods was found in many places shownig that they were able to move fast and long distance. Thus, It is not plausible that they were seafloor dewwelder. Third, the text states that there is a possibility that the arthropods were parasits eating their food on larger dcreatures. However, The woman in the listening part points out that if the arthropods were parasits. , heir numbers must be limited since the other creature that they had feed on them would died out. because there are limited number of parasaits that a primitive fish or other arthropods can suppy food for
The text talks about the creatures named
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arthropods
that have
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lived
on sea and offers three ways to
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explain
how they had
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lived
. The professor casts doubt on the mentioned ways,
categorically
refutes them one by one.

First
, the passage put forward the
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idea
that the
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arthropods
were hunter swimmers
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creatures and
they have
been feed
on smaller organism found in the ocean. The lecturer, On the
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other
hand, refutes this
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idea
, elaborating that
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other
type of
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arthropods
have a
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well developed
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eye sight
,
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But
the primary species of
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arthropods
lack such
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eye sight
and
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vison
to
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track
their pray and chase them.
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othervise
they
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sould
have
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other
sensors to detect and follow their prays
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but
there was not any evidence on their fossils.

Second, the author in the passage
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demonstate
that they may have
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lived
on the seafloor. In sharp contrast to what mentioned, the speaker professes that the
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other
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organis
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dwelled
on the sea floor have stayed on the local part of their breeding place, feeding on
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remaing
parts of
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other
organisms and are not able to go far or
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fast
.
Nevertheless
, the
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arthropods
was found
in
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many
places
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shownig
that they were able to
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move
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fast
and long distance.
Thus
, It is not plausible that they were seafloor
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dewwelder
.

Third, the text states that there is a possibility that the
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arthropods
were
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parasits
eating their food on larger
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dcreatures
.
However
, The woman in the listening part points out that if the
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arthropods
were
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parasits
.
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,
heir numbers
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must
be limited
since the
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other
creature that they had feed on them would
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died
out.
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because
there
are limited
number of
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parasaits
that a primitive fish or
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other
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arthropods
can
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suppy
food
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IELTS essay The text talks about the creatures named arthropods that have lived on sea and offers three ways to explain how they had lived.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
283 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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