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the T. rex's fossil leg bone still have actual tissue

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The material discusses that leg bone of the T. rex's fossil still has remains of actual tissues of the animal. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage. First, the reading claims that the leg bone of the T. rex's fossils have branching channels that seemed to be hollows where the blood vessels were located. On the other hand, the listening opposed this and says that a died bacteria that lived inside the fossil could colonize hollows like channels. Furthermore, the professor mentions that bacteria lived inside the fossil could leave organic material. As a result, these hollows might not for blood vessels, but they are just traces or residue left by bacteria. Second, the author posits that when they examined the inner bone by microscope they found spheres that could be blood cells. On the contrary, the lecturer refutes this and states that a fossil fo a primitive animal had the same spheres; however, they did not have blood cells. Moreover, the professor claims that these spheres could be a different organism called reddish marrow. third, the author mentions that the dinosaur's leg bone contains collagen. Conversely, the lecturer contradicts this and says that collagen could not last longer than a hundred thousand years, nevertheless, the fossil remained for seventy million years. In addition to that, the professor states that collagen could not stay that long, so the collagen may come from human skin of researchers who handling this fossil.
The material discusses that leg
bone
of the T.
rex
's
fossil
still
has remains of actual tissues of the animal. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.

First
, the reading claims that the leg
bone
of the T.
rex
's
fossils
have branching channels that seemed to be hollows where the
blood
vessels
were located
.
On the other hand
, the listening opposed this and says that a
died
bacteria
that
lived
inside the
fossil
could colonize hollows like channels.
Furthermore
, the professor mentions that bacteria
lived
inside the
fossil
could
leave
organic material.
As a result
, these hollows might not for
blood
vessels,
but
they are
just
traces or residue
left
by bacteria.

Second, the author posits that when they examined the inner
bone
by microscope they found spheres that could be
blood
cells.
On the contrary
, the lecturer refutes this and states that a
fossil
fo
a primitive animal had the same spheres;
however
, they did not have
blood
cells.
Moreover
, the professor claims that these spheres could be a
different
organism called reddish marrow.

third
, the author mentions that the dinosaur's leg
bone
contains collagen.
Conversely
, the lecturer contradicts this and says that collagen could not last longer than a hundred thousand years,
nevertheless
, the
fossil
remained for seventy million years.
In addition
to that, the professor states that collagen could not stay that long,
so
the collagen may
come
from human skin of researchers who handling this
fossil
.
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IELTS essay the T. rex's fossil leg bone still have actual tissue

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