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The subject of the reading passage are disabled people and some misconceptions that people hold in regard to this group of individuals.

The subject of the reading passage are disabled people and some misconceptions that people hold in regard to this group of individuals. 56NdP

The subject of the reading passage are disabled people and some misconceptions that people hold in regard to this group of individuals. Furthermore, the lecture's main purpose is to clarify each one of them: disabled people are not equivalent to sick people, they actually enjoy a good quality of life and they do not want to inspire others as being special, but just normal. First, the passage states that people deem every disabled person as being sick -he or she must suffer from some mental or physical ailments-, which the professor gainsays because there are different degrees of disability, . . .

The subject of the reading passage are disabled
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people
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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people
 hold in regard to this group of individuals. Furthermore
, the lecture's main purpose is to clarify each one of them: disabled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are not equivalent to sick You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, they actually enjoy a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 quality of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).life, and
life and
 they do not want to inspire others as being special, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 normal.

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, the passage states that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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-he or
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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some
 mental or physical ailments-, which the professor gainsays This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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