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The story about colosseum

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The Colosseum is an architectural manifestation of Romanesque style, belonging to the imperial era, and is one of the most famous amphitheatres in Rome. We all know it as the Roman Colosseum but, nevertheless, its original name is "Amphitheater of the Flavians". The amphitheater was built in Flavian times, on an area at the eastern end of the Roman Forum. Its construction was started by Vespasian in 70 AD. but he still couldn't finish it. In 80 AD, it was inaugurated by Titus. They built it in just ten years, with clearly superb organizational skills. The Romans, that's right, they had been masters in it.

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IELTS essay The story about colosseum

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American English

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105 words

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