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The story about colosseum

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The Colosseum is an architectural manifestation of Romanesque style, belonging to the imperial era, and is one of the most famous amphitheatres in Rome. We all know it as the Roman Colosseum but, nevertheless, its original name is "Amphitheater of the Flavians". The amphitheater was built in Flavian times, on an area at the eastern end of the Roman Forum. Its construction was started by Vespasian in 70 AD. but he still couldn't finish it. In 80 AD, it was inaugurated by Titus. They built it in just ten years, with clearly superb organizational skills. The Romans, that's right, they had been masters in it.
The Colosseum is an architectural manifestation of Romanesque style, belonging to the imperial era, and is one of the most
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famous
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in Rome. We all know it as the Roman Colosseum
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but
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nevertheless
, its original name is
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Amphitheater of the
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Flavians
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. The amphitheater
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times, on an area at the eastern
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end
of the Roman Forum. Its construction was
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started
by Vespasian in 70 AD.
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but
he
still
couldn't finish it. In 80 AD, it
was inaugurated
by Titus. They built it in
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just
ten years, with
clearly
superb organizational
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skills
. The Romans, that's right, they had been masters in it.
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IELTS essay The story about colosseum

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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