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The speeding up of life in many areas such as travel and communication has negative effects on society at all levels-individuals, national and global. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, we all are dwelling into modern epoch, which has witnessed a great changes in majority of fields, especially in travel and communication sector. Owing to the fact, it is asserted that the rapid services of travelling and communication have adverse impacts in every segment of life. However, I would argue that evidence put forward by proponents of this viewpoint is unconvincing. To commence with, with regard to positive impacts of travel and communication at individual level. First and foremost, it overcomes the geographical barriers for every individual and has become mere a piece of cake for them to connect with their near and dear ones. In other words, nowadays, it is easy to communicate with friends, family and relatives while, sitting far away from them with the help of video and voice calls on mobile phone or laptop. For instance, in the past, if we had to send a message to our relative, we had to write a letter and approximately after 6 to 7 days they go out later, whereas due to the advancement in technology, it is convenient and easy to talk with anyone. Moving to the national level, it provides a platform to every nation to work starts its business. To be justified, every country has increased its production of everything to increase trade. Moreover, it boosts economy and money circulation of a country. Consequently, meant of means of travelling and communication open avenues for a sustainable economy Further more, there are several decisive impacts on international level. It has become feasible to combat with pandemic, social levels and international Japanese. To elaborate, each country shares their techniques with each other, which mostly helps to developing countries because underdeveloped countries do not have latest techniques due to the dearth of technology. To be exemplified, nowadays, during the period of COVID-19, nations are sharing their techniques and corona vaccine to refrain from this virus. As a result, the cosmos can be refrained from untoward consequences and mishappening of this disastrous. And, as per my above discussion, travel and communication is boon at all levels. Although there are some pros of it, but cons cannot be neglected.
Undoubtedly
, we all are dwelling into modern epoch, which has witnessed a great
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changes
in
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majority of
fields,
especially
in travel and
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communication
sector. Owing to the fact, it
is asserted
that the rapid services of travelling and
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communication
have adverse impacts in every segment of life.
However
, I would argue that evidence put forward by proponents of this viewpoint is unconvincing.

To commence with, with regard to
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positive
impacts of travel and
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communication
at individual
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level
.
First
and foremost, it overcomes the geographical barriers for every individual and has become mere a piece of cake for them to connect with their near and dear ones.
In other words
, nowadays, it is easy to communicate with friends, family and relatives while, sitting far away from them with the
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help
of video and voice calls on mobile phone or laptop.
For instance
, in the past, if we had to
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send
a message to our relative, we had to write a letter and approximately after 6 to 7 days they go out later, whereas due to the advancement in technology, it is convenient and easy to talk with anyone. Moving to the national
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level
, it provides a platform to every nation to work
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starts
its business. To
be justified
, every
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country
has increased its production of everything to increase trade.
Moreover
, it boosts economy and money circulation of a
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country
.
Consequently
, meant of means of travelling and
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communication
open avenues for a sustainable economy

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Further more
, there are several decisive impacts on international
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level
. It has become feasible to combat with pandemic, social
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levels
and international Japanese. To elaborate, each
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country
shares their techniques with each other, which
mostly
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helps
to developing
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countries
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because
underdeveloped
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countries
do not have
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latest
techniques due to the dearth of technology. To
be exemplified
, nowadays, during the period of COVID-19, nations are sharing their techniques and corona vaccine to refrain from this virus.
As a result
, the cosmos can
be refrained
from untoward consequences and
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mishappening
of this disastrous.

And, as per my above discussion, travel and
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communication
is boon at all
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levels
. Although there are
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some
pros of it,
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but
cons cannot
be neglected
.
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IELTS essay The speeding up of life in many areas such as travel and communication has negative effects on society at all levels-individuals, national and global.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
359 words
6.0
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