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Nowadays, the internet system develops faster and faster. People often read e-books instead of paper books. In your opinion, what are the pros and cons of that?

Nowadays, the internet system develops faster and faster. People often read e-books instead of paper books. In your opinion, what are the pros and cons of that? 3LdxX
It is increasingly clear that computer technology is becoming more and more advanced, which also lead to using e-book more often. Reading e-book would bring certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks. On the one hand, it is clear that e-books are being used by humans more frequently would create several advantages. One evident strength is that it would play a part in protecting the environment by reducing many tree die. According to news, having thousands of tree die due to making paper every year. In other words, people do not use paper to make an e-book, this means that will not have any tree die in process of making e-books, playing a part in protecting the environment. Another reason is people would find it easier to search for an e-book than a paper book. In Vietnam, to look for a book, especially a foreign book, you have to go to big and well-known bookstores that on the chance to find it. On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. First, it would have an adverse impact on our health. People who devote a large amount of time to read e-books are more likely to suffer from various health problems such as eye strain, short-sightedness. Second, not everyone has an opportunity of getting access to technology. In particular, people who hardly ever have enough, even for their most basic needs like food, are even more impossible to have a mobile device, which allow them to read e-books. In conclusion, there are plus points to read e-books, including protecting the environment, and more easier to find than a paper book. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of the negative effect on people's health, and limited access to people.
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increasingly
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clear
that computer technology is becoming more and more advanced, which
also
lead to using e-book more
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often
. Reading e-book would bring certain benefits
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but
there will
also
be
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some
drawbacks. On the one hand, it is
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clear
that e-books are being
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used
by humans more
frequently
would create several advantages. One evident strength is that it would play a part in protecting the environment by reducing
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many
tree
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die
. According to news, having thousands of tree
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die
due to making paper every year.
In other words
,
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people
do not
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use
paper to
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make
an e-book, this means that will not have any tree
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die
in process of making e-books, playing a part in protecting the environment. Another reason is
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people
would find it easier to search for an e-book than a paper
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book
. In Vietnam, to look for a
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book
,
especially
a foreign
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book
, you
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have to
go to
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big
and well-known bookstores that on the chance to find it.
On the other hand
, there are
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some
obvious disadvantages that would arise.
First
, it would have an adverse impact on our health.
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People
who devote a large amount of time to read e-books are more likely to suffer from various health problems such as eye strain,
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short-sightedness
. Second, not everyone has an opportunity of getting access to technology.
In particular
,
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people
who hardly ever have
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enough
, even for their most basic needs like food, are even more impossible to have a mobile device, which
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allow
them to read e-books.
In conclusion
, there are plus points to read e-books, including protecting the environment, and
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more easier
to find than a paper
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book
.
However
, the downside would emerge
consequently
in terms of the
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negative
effect on
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people
's health, and limited access to
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people
.

IELTS essay Nowadays, the internet system develops faster and faster. People often read e-books instead of paper books. In your opinion, what are the pros and cons of that?

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