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The self-improvement a long process but it is fun, if you want to improve your self in these skills: writing English, speaking English, trait of Patience, the power of memorize follow these steps.

The self-improvement a long process but it is fun, if you want to improve your self in these skills: writing English, speaking English, trait of Patience, the power of memorize follow these steps. BwM3p
First, to improve your skill in writing English, read a book every day and write day by day, after that share it to good writer to rate it to you and give to you his/her advice. Second, to improve your skill in speaking English, try to listen academic English every day, and read a English book every day. Do practice to this skill every day because that will make you a good speaker. Third- step to improve your power on memorize, first try to memorize Quran then memorize a poems, and play a smart plays. Finally, to improve your trait of patience, when you get angry, change your position, and count from 1 to 10. And if you do any kind of sports that will help you to be less your angry. If you follow these steps you will have the results you want.
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your trait of patience, when you
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IELTS essay The self-improvement a long process but it is fun, if you want to improve your self in these skills: writing English, speaking English, trait of Patience, the power of memorize follow these steps.

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