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My Favorite High School Teacher

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There were numerous great teachers that educated me at my high school years. However there was only one teacher that who stood out. Not only she excelled at teaching math, she also educated me about truly useful life lessons, that still guides me through my toughest times even today. She had 2 important principles. First one being " The lazy man always does twice the work". Which delivers a simple message, no matter what don't be lazy, therefore do your task, work or job to the fullest. If you don't you "Always aspire for more, be a diligent person" was the second principle. At first it felt annoying but, know that I thought about it, I was clinging on them to this day. After implementing them, I have noticed sudden changes throughout my whole life. Before I knew, I was working harder as well as being more productive, thus being improved version of myself. To be honest I couldn't know where I would be without these life changing quotes.
There were numerous great teachers that educated me at my high school years.
However
there was
only
one teacher that who stood out. Not
only
she excelled at teaching math, she
also
educated me about
truly
useful life lessons, that
still
guides me through my toughest times even
today
. She had 2
important
principles.
First
one being
"
The lazy
man
always does twice the work
"
. Which delivers a simple message, no matter what don't be lazy,
therefore
do your task, work or job to the fullest. If you don't you
"
Always aspire for more, be a diligent person
"
was the second principle. At
first it
felt annoying
but
, know that I
thought
about it, I was clinging on them to this day. After implementing them, I have noticed sudden
changes
throughout my whole life.
Before
I knew, I was working harder
as
well as being more productive,
thus
being
improved
version of myself. To be honest I couldn't know where I would be without
these life
changing quotes.

IELTS essay My Favorite High School Teacher

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