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The responsibilities for the environment rest with (belong to) not only the government but also with individuals. What’s your opinion?

The responsibilities for the environment rest with (belong to) not only the government but also with individuals. What’s your opinion? 56YRN

The environment plays a critical role in human life, but some decades have seen the global warming because of the polluted environment. I strongly agree with the idea that both the government and individuals have to respond to the environment. Looking at the individuals’ argument, they say that they pay taxes so the government should use the budget to find the way protecting the environment. However, I do not think this opinion is valid because they should be responsible for the disposal of their waste. For example, in Vietnam people throw rubbish everywhere, however animals such as dogs and birds might eat this garbage includes plastics or small pieces of glass which may damage their stomach and die. Therefore, people should be concerned the kind of waste and classifying them in daily life. The government might have many ways to protect the environment. Firstly, they should impose a strict law that bans the unprocessed wastewater from factories directly into the water sources. Formosa in Vietnam is a noticeable example and their toxic emission killed all flora and fauna in a large of the sea. The government should punish with a large amount of money or withdraw the business license if companies violate this law. This could lead less air and water pollution. In addition, the government should plant more trees, open more parks such as in cities and around industrial areas, which may reduce the heat from the Sun and concrete buildings. In conclusion, I believe that protecting the environment is responsible of both the government and individuals. I think that people should aware the global warming affected by human behaviour.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 plays a critical role in human life, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 decades have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 the global warming This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the polluted You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. I strongly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 that both the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 and individuals This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 respond to the environment.

Looking at the individuals’ argument, they say that they pay taxes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the budget to find the way protecting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. However
, I do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 this opinion is valid This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they should be responsible for the disposal of their waste. For example
, in Vietnam This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 throw rubbish everywhere, however
 animals such as dogs and birds might eat this garbage includes plastics or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 pieces of glass which may damage their stomach and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :pass away
die
. Therefore
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 should be concerned
 the kind of waste and classifying them in daily life.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 might have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 ways to protect the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. Firstly
, they should impose a strict law that bans the unprocessed wastewater from factories directly
 into the water sources. Formosa in Vietnam is a noticeable example and their toxic emission killed all flora and fauna in a large of the sea. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 should punish with a large amount of money or withdraw the business license if This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 violate this law. This could lead less air and water pollution. In addition
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 should plant more trees, open more parks such as in cities and around industrial areas, which may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the heat from the Sun and concrete buildings.

In conclusion
, I believe that protecting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 is The usual collocations for "responsible" is "responsible for". Did you mean "responsible for" or "in charge of"?responsible forin charge of
responsible of
 both the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpowerministryunionauthoritystaterule
government
 and individuals. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 should aware the global warming This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 by human Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
. 