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The report below shows the number of travellers visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The report below shows the number of travellers visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. BWp1m
The line graph illustrates the stats about visitors arriving to a selected Caribbean island from year 2010 to year 2017. To commence with, in 2010, the total amount of travellers were 1 million out of which one-fourth rested on the cruise; whereas, remaining three-fourth were on the island. After three year, in 2013, the proportion of visitors got doubled than in 2010 and reached the mark of 2 million. Similarly, the number of travellers stating not only on cruise ships but also on the island were twice the amount back in 2010. It was about 0. 5 million and 1. 5 million respectively in 2013. For the next year, the flow of people got escalated by almost half a million. Although, the statistics for people staying on seashore remians stagnent, an upsurge of 0. 5 million was recorded among the public leaving on the ships. At the end, in 2017, 1 million more visitors were travelling to the Caribbean island as compared to that in 2013. However, now more layman prefers to stay on cruise ships then leaving on lands. About 2 million on ships, and 1. 5 million on islands. Overall, it can be commented that with each passing year the tourists kept in increasing and the year 2017 was the best year with highest number in each section.
The line graph illustrates the stats about visitors arriving to a selected Caribbean
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from
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2010 to
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2017.

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travellers
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were
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out of which one-fourth rested on the cruise; whereas, remaining three-fourth were on the
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island
. After three
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year
, in 2013, the proportion of visitors
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than in 2010 and reached the mark of 2
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million
.
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, the number of
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travellers
stating not
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only
on cruise
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ships
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but
also
on the
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island
were twice the amount back in 2010. It was about 0. 5
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million
and 1. 5
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million
respectively
in 2013.

For the
next
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year
, the flow of
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people
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got
escalated by almost half a
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million
. Although, the statistics for
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people
staying on seashore
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remians
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, an upsurge of 0. 5
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was recorded
among the public leaving on the
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ships
. At the
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end
, in 2017, 1
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more visitors were travelling to the Caribbean
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island
as compared to that in 2013.
However
,
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now
more layman prefers to stay on cruise
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ships
then leaving on lands. About 2
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million
on
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, and 1. 5
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million
on islands.

Overall
, it can
be commented
that with each passing
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the tourists
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kept
in increasing and the
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2017 was the best
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with
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number in each section.
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IELTS essay The report below shows the number of travellers visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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4 paragraphs
220 words
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