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The recreation/entertainment forms which you like best

The recreation/entertainment forms which you like best xOWry
Movie night is something I do routinely, it helps me recharge my battery when I tired after each school day. Watching movies, especial detective movies help me in different ways. The schoolwork is stressful, demanding and it has been a drain on my energy, so I always watching movies when I am free. Sometimes I invite friends, but you know just once a month because my friends are regularly occupied with their work. You know, my friends often ask me why I don't go out instead of staying at home to watch movies and I say “Yeah, that is my hobby. I just do the things I love, that is all”.
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Movie
night is something I do
routinely
, it
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helps
me recharge my battery when I tired after each school day.

Watching
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movies
, especial detective
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movies
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help
me in
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different
ways. The schoolwork is stressful, demanding and it has been a drain on my energy,
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so
Did you mean "I'm always watching", "I am always watching" or "I was always watching"?
I always watching
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movies
when I am free.
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Sometimes
I invite friends,
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but
you know
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just
once a month
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because
my friends are
regularly
occupied with their work. You know, my friends
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often
ask me why I don't go out
instead
of staying at home to
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watch
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movies
and I say “Yeah,
that is
my hobby. I
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just
do the things I
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love
,
that is
all”.

IELTS essay The recreation/entertainment forms which you like best

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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