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the reasons for and against doing dangerous sports

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Do you know the dangerous sport is one of the most popular sport of the world? Nowadays more and more people favour training extreme sports, such as parkour, snowboarding, hang-gliding, abseiling, surfing. Most of us imagine that doing this adventure sports is relieving, another people find it terrifying. People who are keen of adventure sports often face crashes. Doing this sport has both pros and cons. Although this game is a rather enthuthiastic type of the sport, it has certain adventages. To begin with, it will benifit their health and will keep them fit, it backs up them mentally. This sport is time -consuming and challenging. For this reason, people can spend their more time on this challenging sport instead of wasting it. People who want to get adrenalin rush find this type of sports fun and exciting. That's the positive side of it. On the other hand, adventure sports have the other facet which cons. The important disadvantage of this sport is causing death of the person. This sport is more frighting than expected. If people underestimate challenging and terrifying of this sport it may cost their valuable lives. To summarize, by being carefully people minimize the cons of these sports.
Do you know the
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is one of the most popular
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of the world? Nowadays more and more
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people
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training extreme
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, such as parkour, snowboarding, hang-gliding, abseiling, surfing. Most of us imagine that doing this adventure
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sports
is relieving, another
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people
find it terrifying.
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People
who are keen of adventure
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sports
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often
face crashes. Doing this
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has both pros and cons. Although this game is a
rather
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enthuthiastic
type of the
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, it has certain
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adventages
. To
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with, it will
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benifit
their health and will
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them fit, it backs up them mentally. This
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is time -consuming and challenging.
For this reason
,
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people
can spend their more time on this challenging
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instead
of wasting it.
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People
who want to
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get
adrenalin rush find this type of
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fun and exciting. That's the
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positive
side of it.
On the other hand
, adventure
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have the other facet which cons. The
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disadvantage of this
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is causing death of the person. This
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is more frighting than
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expected
. If
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people
underestimate challenging and terrifying of this
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it may cost their valuable
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lives
.
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, by being
carefully
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people
minimize the cons of these
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IELTS essay the reasons for and against doing dangerous sports

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