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The reason is that I am often influenced by advertising myself.

The reason is that I am often influenced by advertising myself. YBLpB
I agree with the former opinion. The reason is that I am often influenced by advertising myself. Recently, a lot of advertisements have been posted on SNS such as instagram and Twitter, and video sites such as Youtube, and each advertisement is very devised to make consumers buy products. As a result, I often find the product very good and often search for it. Of course, I can understand the latter opinion that advertisements are so many and common these days, but I think that the reason why there are so many advertisements is that it has a great influence on us and is a proof that it is effective.
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IELTS essay The reason is that I am often influenced by advertising myself.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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