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. The reading states asteroids are better options for colonization and supports its suggestion using an array of reasons. On the contrary, the lecturer cites three reasons to reject the points in the reading.

Humans have dreamt about living out of the earth from ancient centuries. They consider the moon and Mars as appropriate candidates. The reading states asteroids are better options for colonization and supports its suggestion using an array of reasons. On the contrary, the lecturer cites three reasons to reject the points in the reading. First, the writer explains asteroids enjoy low gravity. The low gravity is beneficial for spacecraft landing and taking off, due to the fact, they need less power. In addition, they would be able to transfer more equipment which they need to build the colonies on the asteroid. Conversely, the lecturer argues low gravity results in health problems for people who will live on the asteroids. Low gravity leads to decreases in bone density and losses muscle mass. Second, the writer believes asteroids are thriving of raw materials and cherished metals, for example, gold and platinum. The sponsors can bring these materials to the earth and raise money for the expanses. In contrast, the lecturer declares costs for transporting the raw material to the earth are high. In addition, if the supply of material, such as gold, increases, as a result, its price will reduce in the market. Consequently, the mining and transporting of these materials will not be economical. Finally, the writer claims since asteroids occasionally get close to the earth they are more reachable than planets, for instance, Mars, which it takes two years to travel to there. However, the professor argues returning from an asteroid to the earth is complicated. In fact, asteroids' orbital paths sometimes are far away from the earth, and this long distance is a challenge. To conclude, the writer believes asteroids are a better option rather than Mars and the moon and provides a number of reasons to support it. However, the speaker opposes the idea about colonization on asteroids using several reasons and examples.

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earth
 from ancient centuries. They consider the moon and Mars as appropriate candidates. The reading states You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworld
asteroids
 are better options for colonization and supports its suggestion using an array of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reasons
. On the contrary
, the lecturer cites three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reasons
 to reject the points in the reading.

First
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcorrespondentauthorreportercriticcolumnistpoet
writer
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explains
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asteroids
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low
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gravity
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmallflatlittlebelowdepressed
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gravity
 is beneficial for spacecraft landing and taking off, due to the fact, they need less power. In addition
, they would be able to transfer more equipment which they need to build the colonies on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworld
asteroid
. Conversely
, the lecturer argues You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmallflatlittlebelowdepressed
low
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gravity
 results in health problems for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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live
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asteroids
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsmallflatlittlebelowdepressed
Low
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gravity
 leads to decreases in bone density and losses muscle mass.

Second, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcorrespondentauthorreportercriticcolumnistpoet
writer
 believes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworld
asteroids
 are thriving of raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssupplyobjectcomponentelementtextile
materials
 and cherished metals, for example
, gold and platinum. The sponsors can bring these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssupplyobjectcomponentelementtextile
materials
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
earth
 and raise money for the expanses. In contrast
, the lecturer declares costs for transporting the raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
earth
 are high. In addition
, if the supply of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactualperceptiblesubstantialappreciableearthlyphysical
material
, such as gold, increases, as a result
, its price will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 in the market. Consequently
, the mining and transporting of these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodssupplyobjectcomponentelementtextile
materials
 will not be economical.

Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcorrespondentauthorreportercriticcolumnistpoet
writer
 claims since You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworld
asteroids
occasionally
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get
 close to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
earth
 they are more reachable than planets, for instance
, Mars, which it takes two years to travel to there. However
, the professor argues returning from an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworld
asteroid
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
earth
is complicated
. In fact, asteroids' orbital paths The adverb 'sometimes' usually goes after the verb 'are'.are sometimes
sometimes are
 far away from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplanetdustglobe
earth
, and this long distance is a challenge.

To conclude
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcorrespondentauthorreportercriticcolumnistpoet
writer
 believes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworld
asteroids
 are a better option rather
 than Mars and the moon and provides a number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reasons
 to support it. However
, the speaker opposes the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 about colonization on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsphereearthglobeworld
asteroids
 using several You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlogicreasoningsense
reasons
 and examples. 