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The reading claims that sustaining human life on venus is impossible.

The reading claims that sustaining human life on venus is impossible. 56N1N
The reading claims that sustaining human life on venus is impossible. However, the professor explains that it would be challenging though, it is, in fact, possible. He explains that building a station that floats off the surface of venus allows a human presence on venus. The reading states that maintaining a human presence on venus is impossible because the atmospheric pressure there is 90 times greater than that on earth's surface. As a result, any human being that will land on venus will be crushed. In response, the professor explains that the high atmospheric pressure is a normal physical fact. However, this problem can be solved. The professor points out that using the space station 50km high will make the pressure on earth. As a result, the problem of the high atmospheric pressure the reading explains will be overcome.
The reading claims that sustaining
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venus
is impossible.
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, the professor
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explains
that it would be challenging though, it is, in fact, possible. He
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explains
that building a station that floats off the surface of
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venus
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presence on
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venus
.

The reading states that maintaining a
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human
presence on
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venus
is impossible
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because
the atmospheric
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pressure
there is 90 times greater than that on earth's surface.
As a result
, any
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human
being that will land on
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venus
will
be crushed
. In response, the professor
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explains
that the high atmospheric
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pressure
is a normal physical fact.
However
, this problem can
be solved
. The professor points out that using the space station
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50km
high will
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make
the
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pressure
on earth.
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, the problem of the high atmospheric
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pressure
the reading
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explains
will
be overcome
.
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IELTS essay The reading claims that sustaining human life on venus is impossible.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
139 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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