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The reading and the lecture are both about a dinosaur fossil.

The reading and the lecture are both about a dinosaur fossil. 66lN8
The reading and the lecture are both about a dinosaur fossil. The author of the reading presents three theoies about why the fossil contain actual tissues of the dinosaur. The lecturer disputes the claims made in the reading. According to the reading, soft substances found inside the bones may well represents the actual blood vessels of T. rex. The speific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He claims those substances has no relation to the blood vessel. Additionally, he points out that bacterias are responsible for making those substances Secondly, the author mentions that speheres which can be found in T. rex contain red blood cells. The lecturer, however, asserts that same spheres are found in other animals's fossils but they didn't conatain any blood cells. However, those spheres just contain red minarels. Finally, the lecturer mentions that. it is impossible that collagen can be found in the 700 years old fossil. Thus, collagen doesn't come from T. rex. It probably came from a researcher who touched it from some research purpose. This directly contradicts what the author indicates.
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and the lecture are both about a dinosaur
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. The author of the
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presents three
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about why the
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contain actual tissues of the dinosaur.
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The
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lecturer
disputes the claims made in the
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. According to the
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, soft substances
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found
inside the bones may well represents the actual
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blood
vessels of T.
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rex
. The
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speific
argument
is challenged
by the
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. He claims those substances has no relation to the
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blood
vessel.
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bacterias
are responsible for making those substances
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, the author mentions that
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speheres
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found
in T.
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rex
contain red
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blood
cells. The
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lecturer
,
however
, asserts that same spheres are
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found
in other
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fossils
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contain red
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, the
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mentions that.
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it
is impossible that collagen can be
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found
in the 700 years
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IELTS essay The reading and the lecture are both about a dinosaur fossil.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
179 words
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