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Studying Abroad for International Students

Studying Abroad for International Students LwGGG

Nowadays, exchange programs have become more common. This kind of program goes understudying abroad which for certain has different benefits and drawbacks at the time simultaneously According to advantages, one most significant aspect of studying overseas is developing a student's self-esteem which leads him/her to deal with problems in a smart way. Additionally, learning to serve themselves by themselves with no need for anyone to do something instead of them. Nevertheless, there are many disadvantages. First of all, students may not be afforded financial support to cover their tuition fees or even travel costs. Moreover, many families refuse to send their son/ daughter to go outside to complete their studies. To sum up, keep in mind both sides and write them down, then compare them and give marks on each suitable one for you to check if it's suitable for you to travel or not.

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 if it's suitable for you to travel

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