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Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages? mbLbr

Nowadays many countries are focused on economic progress and development, Most nations are aiming to improve their economy by implementing business development programs, by doing some there are important social values the were overlooked. In this essay, I will share the benefits of a progressive economy and also cover the struggles that it can uncover. After all things have beend considered, A highly progressive economy is an important stage in a growing nation. There are advantages to having an advanced economy like employment and higher quality of living, but some drawbacks also need to be considered such as cultural and environmental aspects.

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IELTS essay Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

102 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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