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The provided process delineates the information about the steps of manufactured the bricks for the use of building industry.

The provided process delineates the information about the steps of manufactured the bricks for the use of building industry. 8XeG
The provided process delineates the information about the steps of manufactured the bricks for the use of building industry. Overview, every step of the process is necessary the initial step is digging clay from earth and eventual step is delivered to the market. In initial step, with the help of digger machine clay put from the surface of the earth. Afterthat, clay introduce in roller which is convert metal grid into small pieces. Then, water is added with clay and afterthat, it is moulded into the brick shape. Subsequently, moulded brick transfer in drying oven for one to two days. In addition to this, brick put in three stages for make it hard. Firstly, in moderate temperature which is about 200°c - 980°c in kiln. After the moderate kilned it introduce into high temperature, meanwhile, solid brick fill in colling chamber for 48 to 72 hours and bricks is ready for packing. Lastly, it delivered to the market with the help of the truck.
The provided process delineates the information about the
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steps
of manufactured the
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bricks
for the
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use
of building industry. Overview, every
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step
of the process is necessary the initial
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step
is digging
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clay
from earth and eventual
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step
is delivered
to the market. In initial
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step
, with the
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help
of digger machine
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clay
put from the surface of the earth.
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Afterthat
,
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clay
introduce in roller which is convert metal grid into
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small
pieces. Then, water is
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added
with
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clay
and
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afterthat
, it is
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moulded
into the
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brick
shape.
Subsequently
,
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moulded
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brick
transfer in drying oven for one to two days.
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to this,
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brick
put in three stages for
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make
it
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hard
.
Firstly
, in moderate temperature which is about 200°c
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-
980°c in kiln. After the moderate kilned it introduce into high temperature, meanwhile, solid
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brick
fill in
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colling
chamber for 48 to 72 hours and
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bricks
is ready for packing.
Lastly
, it delivered to the market with the
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help
of the truck.
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IELTS essay The provided process delineates the information about the steps of manufactured the bricks for the use of building industry.

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