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the process of instant noodle fabrication.

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The picture illustrates the process of instant noodle fabrication. Overall, it is clear that there are eight steps in the process, beginning with the storage silos of flour, and ending with the labels. Looking at the first stage of the process, the flour is injected into the storage silos before going to the mixer includes water and oil. After completing this stage, the production from mixer pass by rollers go into dough sheets and then going to separate by the dough strips. At the fifth stage in the process, the dough strips go to the noodle discs, after that, it is cooked with oil and then drying before going into the cups with vegetables and spices. At the final stage, the cups being labeled and sealed.
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of instant noodle fabrication.

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that there are eight steps in the
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process
, beginning with the storage silos of flour, and ending with the labels.

Looking at the
first
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stage
of the
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, the flour
is injected
into the storage silos
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before
going to the mixer includes water and oil. After completing this
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stage
, the production from mixer pass by rollers go into dough sheets and then going to separate by the dough strips.

At the fifth
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in the
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, the dough strips go to the noodle discs, after that, it
is cooked
with oil and then drying
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before
going into the cups with vegetables and spices. At the final
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, the cups
being labeled
and sealed.
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IELTS essay the process of instant noodle fabrication.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
126 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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