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describe a city where you have lived in the past

describe a city where you have lived in the past Q2xjb
i born and grow up in tehran and i always live in tehran, actually all of my family and my friend lives here as my both grandfather they live in tehran and all of my family and my friend borned here so i think i live here more than 70 or 80 years or might be more than this as i want to talk about the place that i lived i like the friendship here with all of the guys who born and live here and the true happy mood that you can find in here so i like everything in here you can not find something that is bad or you not like it.
i
born
and grow up in
tehran
and
i
always
live
in
tehran
, actually all of my family and my friend
lives
here as my both grandfather they
live
in
tehran
and all of my family and my friend
borned
here
so
i
think
i
live
here more than 70 or 80 years or might be more than this as
i
want to talk about the place that
i
lived
i
like the friendship here with
all of the
guys who born and
live
here and the true happy mood that you can find in here
so
i
like everything in here you can not find something
that is
bad
or you not like it.
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IELTS essay describe a city where you have lived in the past

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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