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describe a city where you have lived in the past

describe a city where you have lived in the past Q2xjb

i born and grow up in tehran and i always live in tehran, actually all of my family and my friend lives here as my both grandfather they live in tehran and all of my family and my friend borned here so i think i live here more than 70 or 80 years or might be more than this as i want to talk about the place that i lived i like the friendship here with all of the guys who born and live here and the true happy mood that you can find in here so i like everything in here you can not find something that is bad or you not like it.

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Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "bore"?bore
born
 and grow up in Possible spelling mistake found.TehranTerranMehran
tehran
 and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 always You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 in Possible spelling mistake found.TehranTerranMehran
tehran
, actually all of my family and my friend You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
lives
 here as my both grandfather they You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 in Possible spelling mistake found.TehranTerranMehran
tehran
 and all of my family and my friend Possible spelling mistake found.burnedborneboredBorneohornedcorned
borned
 here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 here more than 70 or 80 years or might be more than this as Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to talk about the place that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 like the friendship here with Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 guys who born and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withalive
live
 here and the true happy mood that you can find in here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 like everything in here you can not find something that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 or you not like it. 