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The process of human resource management includes hiring, training, evaluating, and some other factors related to labour relations, health and safety, and fairness concerns

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The process of human resource management includes hiring, training, evaluating, and some other factors related to labour relations, health and safety, and fairness concerns ( Gary Dessler, 2017). As such, those are areas requiring the human resource manager a wide range of skills to people or personnel aspects such as communication skills, leading and controlling skills and some relevant skills that are related to management. In a company, the HR department is responsible for managing the organization’s policies toward employees and the structure of the company or interconnection ( Shaunt Sutner, 2020). The term human resource was first used in the early 1900s and was broadened after that in the 1960s until now to refer to employees in a general definition. Human Resource Management ( HRM) plays an important role in the operation of the business. Gary supposed that there are many examples about a set of skills in HRM that is able to help business success without sufficient plans, organizations or controls.
The process of human
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management includes hiring, training, evaluating, and
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some
other factors related to
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relations, health and safety, and fairness concerns
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Gary
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Dessler
, 2017). As such, those are areas requiring the human
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resource
manager a wide range of
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skills
to
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people
or personnel aspects such as communication
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skills
, leading and controlling
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skills
and
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some
relevant
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skills
that
are related
to management. In a
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company
, the HR department is responsible for managing the organization’s policies toward employees and the structure of the
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company
or interconnection
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(
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Shaunt
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Sutner
, 2020). The term human
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resource
was
first
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used
in the early 1900s and
was broadened
after that in the 1960s until
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now
to refer to employees in a general definition.

Human
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Resource
Management
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(
HRM) plays an
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important
role in the operation of the business. Gary supposed that there are
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many
examples about a set of
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skills
in HRM
that is
able to
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help
business success without sufficient plans, organizations or controls.
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IELTS essay The process of human resource management includes hiring, training, evaluating, and some other factors related to labour relations, health and safety, and fairness concerns

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
163 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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