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f they build a house according to their own houses, they will feel comfortable and happy

f they build a house according to their own houses, they will feel comfortable and happy b2NRB

Obviously, there are many advantages. Firstly, if they build a house according to their own houses, they will feel comfortable and happy. They can arrange spaces at their idea. A house with many people needs many bedrooms. The garden can be wider if the owner loves nature. Secondly, building a free house is also a way to improve the diversity of styles in the neighborhood. The free houses can make the living area more colorful and help attract tourists such as the old huses in Hoi An, the villas in Da Lat… This can help preserve cultural values for future generations

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Firstly
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many
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