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The problem of pollution is getting more and more serious all over the world. All countries are trying to find every method to save the world from all kinds of pollution. discuss both views and give your opinion

The problem of pollution is getting more and more serious all over the world. All countries are trying to find every method to save the world from all kinds of pollution. discuss both views and give your opinion 527wQ
The problem of pollution is getting more and more serious all over the world. All countries are trying to find every method to save the world from all kinds of pollution. Car Zero Day is one such initiative that has been taken in most countries to combat greenhouse gas emissions. While some believe this is an effective approach, others argue that there are alternatives. In this essay, I will also discuss both my views and express my thoughts. Car-free days are being implemented in many countries. However, not all governments have embraced this movement. Many people believe that international car-free day is very effective in fighting air pollution. Because, if done, this will raise public awareness and go viral like a chain reaction. For example, in New Delhi alone, there are three million vehicles on the road every day. If at least a third of these were taken off the road, a few tons of toxic gas would not be released into the atmosphere. This may be just a drop in the ocean, but it becomes important on a global scale when everyone is watching. On the other hand, many people believe that there are more effective ways to deal with pollution such as using public transport, restricting industries, planting trees. Many countries are contemplating banning polluting vehicles altogether in the next few years. In this way, they are achieving the desired results without compromising the comfort of the citizens, which makes it more efficient. These are done in Scandinavian countries and proved to be quite effective. Secondly, it is suggested to stop the construction works that are not environmentally friendly, limit the polluting industries. . . These are effective because emissions from vehicles only accounts for 10% of total air pollution. After discussing both of these points of view, I can make a comparison: International Automobile Day is somewhat effective, but compared to other measures put forward, International Day is somewhat inferior. To reduce pollution, we need to combine many measures and implement them continuously, not in a single day. so, let's take many other measures together to make the earth more and more clean.
The problem of
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pollution
is getting more and more serious all over the world. All
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countries
are trying to find every method to save the world from all kinds of
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pollution
. Car Zero Day is one such initiative that has
been taken
in most
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countries
to combat greenhouse gas emissions. While
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some
believe this is an
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effective
approach, others argue that there are alternatives. In this essay, I will
also
discuss both my views and express my thoughts.

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being implemented
in
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countries
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governments
have embraced this movement.
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people
believe that international car-free day is
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effective
in fighting air
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pollution
.
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Because
, if done, this will raise public awareness and go viral like a chain reaction.
For example
, in New Delhi alone, there are three million vehicles on the road every day. If at least a third of these
were taken
off the road, a few tons of toxic gas would not
be released
into the atmosphere. This may be
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just
a drop in the ocean,
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but
it becomes
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important
on a global scale when everyone is watching.

On the
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hand,
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people
believe that there are more
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effective
ways to deal with
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pollution
such as using public transport, restricting industries, planting trees.
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Many
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countries
are contemplating banning polluting vehicles altogether in the
next
few years. In this way, they are achieving the desired results without compromising the comfort of the citizens, which
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makes
it more efficient. These
are done
in Scandinavian
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countries
and proved to be quite
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effective
.
Secondly
, it
is suggested
to
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stop
the construction works that are not
environmentally
friendly, limit the polluting industries.
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These are
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effective
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emissions from vehicles
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only
accounts for 10% of total air pollution.

After discussing both of these points of view, I can
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make
a comparison: International Automobile Day is somewhat
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effective
,
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but
compared to
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other
measures put forward, International Day is somewhat inferior. To
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reduce
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pollution
, we need to combine
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many
measures and implement them
continuously
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make
the earth more and more clean.
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IELTS essay The problem of pollution is getting more and more serious all over the world. All countries are trying to find every method to save the world from all kinds of pollution. discuss both views and give your opinion

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