Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The price movement of the market

The price movement of the market K3kqL
The consumer price index (CPI) in May 2021 increased by 0. 16% over the previous month, up 1. 43% compared to December 2020 and up 2. 9% compared to May 2020. On average, in the first 5 months of 2021, CPI increased by 1. 29% over the same period last year, the lowest increase since 2016 (in 2016 it increased by 1. 59%; in 2017 it increased by 4. 47%; in 2018 it increased by 3 0. 01%; 2. 74% in 2019; 4. 39% in 2020; 1. 29% in 2021; core inflation in 5 months increased by 0. 82%. In which, important and essential commodities such as food, foodstuffs, gasoline, electricity and water. . . all have relatively stable prices, without any abnormal fluctuations. Specifically, compared to the previous month, the price of rice decreased by 0. 19% (ordinary rice decreased by 0. 2%; delicious rice decreased by 0. 14%; sticky rice decreased by 0. 28%), domestic rice price decreased due to the source of rice. Abundant supply in the southern provinces, besides the continued decline in export prices of Thailand and India, also made domestic rice prices fall. Pork price decreased by 1. 61% (making the overall CPI decrease by 0. 05 percentage points) due to well controlled African swine fever, guaranteed pork supply (total number of pigs in the whole country increased by 11. 8 in May). % compared to the same period last year); prices of processed pork products decreased (prices of roast meat, ham and sausages decreased by 0. 58%; animal fat decreased by 3. 45%); Poultry meat price decreased by 0. 1% due to stable development of poultry herd nationwide (as of the end of May 2021, the country's poultry flock was estimated to increase by 6. 4% over the same period last year. ). In the opposite direction, the price of fresh seafood increased by 0. 07%; price of processed seafood increased by 0. 03%; chicken price increased 0. 09%; prices of fresh, dried and processed vegetables increased by 2. 62%. Due to the influence of gasoline and oil price adjustments on April 27, 2021 and May 12, 2021, in which the average price of E5 gasoline increased by 440 VND/liter, A95 gasoline price increased by 370 VND/liter, and oil price diesel increased by 450 VND/liter, causing gasoline price to increase by 2. 12%, diesel oil by 2. 8%; electricity and water prices increased by 2. 54% and 1. 27% respectively due to increased consumption demand in hot weather.
The consumer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
index (CPI) in May 2021
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 0. 16% over the previous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
, up 1. 43% compared to December 2020 and up 2. 9% compared to May 2020. On average, in the
first
5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
months
of 2021, CPI
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 1. 29% over the same period last year, the lowest increase since 2016 (in 2016 it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 1. 59%; in 2017 it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 4. 47%; in 2018 it
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 3 0. 01%; 2. 74% in 2019; 4. 39% in 2020; 1. 29% in 2021; core inflation in 5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
months
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 0. 82%. In which,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
and essential commodities such as food, foodstuffs,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
, electricity and water.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
all
have
relatively
stable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
, without any abnormal fluctuations.
Specifically
, compared to the previous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rice
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
decreased
by 0. 19% (ordinary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rice
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
decreased
by 0. 2%; delicious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rice
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
decreased
by 0. 14%; sticky
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rice
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
decreased
by 0. 28%), domestic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rice
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
decreased
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to the source of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rice
. Abundant supply in the southern provinces,
besides
the continued decline in export
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
of Thailand and India,
also
made domestic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rice
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
fall. Pork
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
decreased
by 1. 61% (making the
overall
CPI decrease by 0. 05 percentage points)
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to well controlled African swine fever, guaranteed pork supply (total number of pigs in the whole country
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 11. 8 in May). % compared to the same period last year);
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
of processed pork products
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
decreased
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
(prices
of roast meat, ham and sausages
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
decreased
by 0. 58%; animal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
decreased
by 3. 45%); Poultry meat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
decreased
by 0. 1%
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to stable development of poultry herd nationwide (as of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of May 2021, the country's poultry flock
was estimated
to increase by 6. 4% over the same period
‘last year’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last year
.
Loose punctuation mark.
)
. In the opposite direction, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
of fresh seafood
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 0. 07%;
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
of processed seafood
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 0. 03%; chicken
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
0. 09%;
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
of fresh, dried and processed vegetables
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 2. 62%.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Due
to the influence of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
and oil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
adjustments on April 27,
Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2021,".
2021
and May 12, 2021, in which the average
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
of E5
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 440 VND/liter, A95
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 370 VND/liter, and oil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
diesel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 450 VND/liter, causing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gasoline
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
price
to increase by 2. 12%, diesel oil by 2. 8%; electricity and water
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
prices
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
by 2. 54% and 1. 27%
respectively
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increased
consumption demand in hot weather.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The price movement of the market

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
415 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts