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the power of advertising in business.

the power of advertising in business. GMNRj
Nowadays the rapid industrialization is taking a place in the world. Today many products are available in the market. To increase their sells many company used to spend a huge amount on advertising. I will explain this point in upcoming paragraphs according to my knowledge. Today the industrial growth has been grown up tremendously. Many companies opened and many companies get closed in a single day across the world. Every company trying their best to rise up the sales. There are many factors which affect the sales of company products such as the presense of company who selling the same product, demand of product, popularity and the amount of trust shown by the customer towards the company, etc. But there is a one way to come out from all this competition and the way is advertising. An advertising increase the popularity of company products in public and make more people aware about the product. Also it rise up the sales of company. In this time with the advancement in the technology, there are many ways and methods for advertising. The most popular method advertising is television and social media among all the various method of advertising. Many company spend a huge amount of money to advertise their product on the world level. Because of this nowadays the marketing business is the one of the most profitable business. Many companies hire a celebrity like cricketer and filmstar to advertise their product. The second most popular platform for advertising is newspapers and magazines. In newspapers there is a one whole page given for advertising. Before putting pen down, i conclude that the advertisement is a main peer for rise up in company sales. Nowadays in the wild competiton between various company advertisement is come out as the most effective and reliable way for company growth.
Nowadays the rapid industrialization is taking a place in the world.
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products
are available in the market. To increase their sells
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many
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company
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used
to spend a huge amount on advertising. I will
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this point in upcoming paragraphs according to my knowledge.
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tremendously
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companies
opened and
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companies
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get
closed in a single day across the world. Every
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company
trying
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best to rise up the
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sales
. There are
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many
factors which affect the
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sales
of
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company
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products
such as the
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presense
of
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company
who selling the same
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product
, demand of
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product
, popularity and the amount of trust shown by the customer towards the
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company
, etc.
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there is a one way to
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out from all this competition and the way is advertising. An advertising increase the popularity of
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company
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products
in public and
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make
more
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people
aware about the
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product
.
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rise
up the
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sales
of
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company
. In this time with the advancement in the technology, there are
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many
ways and methods for advertising. The most popular method advertising is television and social media among all the various method of advertising.
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Many
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company
spend a huge amount of money to advertise their
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product
on the world level.
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of this nowadays the marketing business is the one of the most profitable business.
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companies
hire a celebrity like cricketer and
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filmstar
to advertise their
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product
. The second most popular platform for advertising is newspapers and magazines. In newspapers there is a one whole page
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given
for advertising.
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Before
putting pen down,
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conclude that the advertisement is a main peer for rise up in
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company
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sales
. Nowadays in the wild
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competiton
between various
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company
advertisement is
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come
out as the most effective and reliable way for
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company
growth.
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IELTS essay the power of advertising in business.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
303 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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