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The plans below show the layout out of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans below show the layout out of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. 7mpn
The two layouts illustrate how the sports centre of a university will change after the developments planned in the future. Overall, a growth in the size of the sports centre is observed after the manipulations. Also, there are significant changes in the facility according to the planned improvements. Currently, a 25-meter-long pool is situated in the middle of the sports centre. Moreover, pool is surrounded by a changing room, a gym, a seating area and a reception which are located to the west, north, east and south of the university sports centre, respectively. Additionally, there are two outdoor courts which are to the west and east of the facility. According to the future plans, university sports centre will grow in size due to the new departments. The 25-meter-long pool and the surroundings (changing room, gym, seating, reception) will not be removed. However, gym will be extended to the east. Furthermore, instead of the western outdoor court, an additional pool, which will be used for leisure activities, will be built to the west of the sports centre. Changing rooms will be added to the south-west and south-east of the facility. In addition, sports shop and café will be opened to the west and east of the entrance. Finally, changing room and dance studios will be constructed to the east of the sports facility.
The two layouts illustrate how the
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sports
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centre
of a university will
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change
after the developments planned in the future.

Overall
, a growth in the size of the
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sports
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centre
is observed
after the manipulations.
Also
, there are significant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in the facility according to the planned improvements.

Currently
, a 25-meter-long
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pool
is situated
in the middle of the
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sports
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centre
.
Moreover
,
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pool
is surrounded
by a
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changing
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room
, a gym, a seating area and a reception which
are located
to the west, north, east and south of the university
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sports
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centre
,
respectively
.
Additionally
, there are two outdoor courts which are to the west and east of the facility.

According to the future plans, university
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sports
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centre
will grow in size due to the new departments. The 25-meter-long
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pool
and the surroundings
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(changing
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room
, gym, seating, reception) will not
be removed
.
However
, gym will
be extended
to the east.
Furthermore
,
instead
of the western outdoor court, an additional
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pool
, which will be
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used
for leisure activities, will
be built
to the west of the
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sports
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centre
.
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Changing
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rooms
will be
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added
to the south-west and south-east of the facility.
In addition
,
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sports
shop and café will
be opened
to the west and east of the entrance.
Finally
,
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changing
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room
and dance studios will
be constructed
to the east of the
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sports
facility.

IELTS essay The plans below show the layout out of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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