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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment

The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment 7Q8A
The given illustrations reveal current structure of the university’s sport centre with its planned layout. Overall, in the future, sport centre will be transformed into indoor facility with increasing in size due to introduction of new sport amenities. At the moment, university’s sport centre is composed of central indoor area which is sited in the middle of two outdoor courts. Rectangular indoor building has an access from southern part where the reception is situated. There exist 25 meter long swimming pool surrounded by gym from the north, changing room from the west and seating from the east. In the future, two outdoor courts will be replaced with new facilities while former indoor pool, changing room and seatings will not be changed with extending gym area almost two-times. Current western outdoor courts are planned to replace by leisure pool with new changing room for swimmers. The eastern part of the plan will be occupied by two dance studios which will be sited eastern side of new sports hall with spring of changing room on the south-east of the plan. In order to create some convenience for students new sports shop and café are planned to open on the either side of the reception in the future.
The
given
illustrations reveal
current
structure of the university’s
sport
centre
with its planned layout.

Overall
, in the future,
sport
centre
will
be transformed
into
indoor
facility with
increasing in size
due to introduction of
new
sport
amenities.

At the moment, university’s
sport
centre
is composed
of central
indoor
area which
is sited
in the middle of two outdoor courts. Rectangular
indoor
building has
an access
from southern part where the reception
is situated
. There exist 25
meter
long swimming pool surrounded by gym from the north,
changing
room
from the west and seating from the east.

In the future, two outdoor courts will
be replaced
with
new
facilities while former
indoor
pool,
changing
room
and
seatings
will not be
changed
with extending gym area almost two-times.
Current
western outdoor courts
are planned
to replace by leisure pool with
new
changing
room
for swimmers. The eastern part of the plan will
be occupied
by two dance studios which will
be sited
eastern side of
new
sports
hall with spring of
changing
room
on the south-east of the plan. In order to create
some
convenience for students
new
sports
shop and café
are planned
to open on the either side of the reception in the future.
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IELTS essay The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment

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