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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. DOe6

The two illustration show the changes of Grange Park from 1920 to today. This report will describe these changes. A few elements of the original planning remain in the in the same place so with that today is structure. However some old elements were removed and replaced with the new ones to make the park more interesting. The Grange Parker opened in 1920, and it was accessible via two entrance: One on the north in Arnold Avenue and the order on the south in Eldon Street. A fountain was built on the center of the park, while on the left side was placed a the stage for musicians. Next to the both the entrance the rose the gardeners was the construct with that seats nearby them, to allow people to smell the flower and enjoy the music. On the north-easter it could be found in a port for the water plan and opposite they have it in a glasshouse was set up. Today decorate the modifications of the place appeared to be evident. The fountain has been removed the end substitute by at square Rose Garden with seats on both side. The other Rose Gardens of the original planning have been removed, except for the one on the north west. This stage is for musicians has been improved to Amphitheater for a concert during the restyling. The new elements have added to the park, to permit families to spend a day in there. On the north-easter of the park where it has placed the children area and the cafe on its left side. A new entrance for underground and car park on the south east and on the left a Water feature replace the Glasshouse

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show
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 of Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
Park
 from 1920 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. This report will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
.

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in the in the
 same place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 with that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 is structure. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 elements were removed
 and replaced with the new ones to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 more interesting. The Grange Parker opened in 1920, and it was accessible via two entrance: One on the north in Arnold Avenue and the order on the south in Eldon Street. A fountain was built
The usual prepositions to use when surrounded is "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the center"?in the center
on the center
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, while on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side was placed
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "a" or "the" is left.athe
a the
 stage for musicians. Next
 to the both the entrance the rose the gardeners was the construct with that seats nearby them, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to smell the flower and enjoy the music.

On the north-easter it could be found
 in a port for the water plan and opposite they have it in a glasshouse was set
 up. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 decorate the modifications of the place appeared to be evident. The fountain has been removed
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 substitute by at square Rose Garden with seats on both side. The other Rose Gardens of the original planning have been removed
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the one on the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-westnorthwest
north west
.

This stage is for musicians has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 to Amphitheater for a concert during the restyling. The new elements have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, to permit families to spend a day in there. On the north-easter of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 where it has placed the children area and the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 on its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side. A new entrance for underground and car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 on the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
 and on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 a Water feature replace the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphGlasshouse.Glasshouse!Glasshouse?Glasshouse:Glasshouse,Glasshouse;
Glasshouse