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The plans below exhibit the site of an airport now and after redeveloping next year

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The plans below exhibit the site of an airport now and after redeveloping next year. It is clear that the airport will undergo a dramatic transformation, bigger and more convenient. The gate at the south side will be expanded into the Y-shaped from 8 gates to 18 gates with two sky trains in the middle replacing the walkway. Go straight ahead from the sky train, on the right, the government will build some shops. The middle part of the airport includes: the security, two passport controls and customs will remain the same. From the direction of the entrance departures, the check-in will be removed to the right side of the room and replaced by the bag drop. In the rest of the room, from the entrance of arrivals, there will be a cafe, an ATM on the right side and a car hire at the corner. Overall, the Southwest airport will be upgraded with more facilities for clients.
The plans below exhibit the site of an
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now
and after redeveloping
next
year. It is
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clear
that the
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airport
will undergo a dramatic transformation, bigger and more convenient.

The gate at the south side will
be expanded
into the Y-shaped from 8 gates to 18 gates with two sky trains in the middle replacing the walkway. Go straight ahead from the sky train, on the right, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
will build
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some
shops. The middle part of the
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airport
includes: the security, two passport controls and customs will remain the same. From the direction of the entrance departures, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
-in will
be removed
to the right side of the room and replaced by the bag drop. In the rest of the room, from the entrance of arrivals, there will be a
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cafe
, an ATM on the right side and a car hire at the corner.

Overall
, the Southwest
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airport
will
be upgraded
with more facilities for clients.
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IELTS essay The plans below exhibit the site of an airport now and after redeveloping next year

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