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The picture belows shows the process of making different types of tea from tea leaves . Write a report for a university leacture describing the process below.

The picture belows shows the process of making different types of tea from tea leaves. Write a report for a university leacture describing the process below. qg2d
The given process illustrates the profuction of several types of tea from tea leaves. Overall, from the process it can be seen that the formation of tea by a various mrthods, beginning with handpicking of tea leaves and ending with different flavour of teas. To begin with, tea leaves are picked by handpicking method. After that moisture is removed from the tea leaves. Further it is divided into different stages. The tea leaves are steamed for a soecific time than it is directly rolled. Finally leaves are dired and produced a green tea. In second stage, after removing moisture it is directly rolled in roller, than it is kept in air for 4 hours. Moreover it is dried and make a oolong tea. For small leaf black tea, first two steps are similar as green tea. In third step leaves are crushed that it is expoaed in air for two days. At lastly, it is dried leaves and small leaf black tea are ready to used.
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process illustrates the
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profuction
of several types of
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tea
from
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tea
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leaves
.

Overall
, from the process it can be
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seen
that the formation of
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tea
by a various
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mrthods
, beginning with handpicking of
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tea
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leaves
and ending with
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different
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flavour
of teas.

To
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begin
with,
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tea
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leaves
are picked
by handpicking method.
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After
that moisture
is removed
from the
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tea
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leaves
.
Further
it
is divided
into
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different
stages. The
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tea
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leaves
are steamed
for a
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soecific
time than it is
directly
rolled.
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Finally
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leaves
are
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dired
and produced a green
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tea
. In second stage, after removing moisture it is
directly
rolled in roller, than it is
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kept
in air for 4 hours.
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Moreover
it
is dried
and
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make
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a
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oolong
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tea
. For
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small
leaf black
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tea
,
first
two steps are similar as green
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tea
. In third step
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leaves
are crushed
that it is
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expoaed
in air for two days. At
lastly
, it
is dried
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leaves
and
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small
leaf black
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tea
are ready to
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used
.

IELTS essay The picture belows shows the process of making different types of tea from tea leaves. Write a report for a university leacture describing the process below.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
166 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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