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The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Qjy3
The given picture illustrates information about how wasted glass bottles are recycled. Overall, there are three big different stages in the recycling process, starting from collecting bottles and ending with releasing again. At the first stage, all wasted glass bottles are collected to a collection point before they are treated. In stage two, these bottles are rinsed in high-pressure water. After rinsing, a separation for glass bottles into three different types, clear bottles, green bottles and brown bottles, their coming place is a glass factory. In that glass factory, all bottles are broken to become many glass pieces. Then, they go through a heat treatment at 600oC to 800oC and this process is to burn in furnace. Next, bottles come out to two different types, new liquid glass and recycled liquid glass, then it is shaped in glass mould. In the final stage, those bottles are made with many labels with products packed in, and they are sold in a chain of supermarkets.
The
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given
picture illustrates information about how wasted
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glass
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bottles
are recycled
.

Overall
, there are three
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big
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different
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stages
in the recycling process, starting from collecting
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bottles
and ending with releasing again.

At the
first
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stage
, all wasted
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glass
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bottles
are collected
to a collection point
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before
they
are treated
. In
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stage
two, these
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bottles
are rinsed
in high-pressure water. After rinsing, a separation for
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glass
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bottles
into three
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different
types,
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clear
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bottles
, green
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bottles
and brown
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bottles
, their coming place is a
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glass
factory.

In that
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glass
factory, all
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bottles
are broken
to become
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many
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glass
pieces. Then, they go through a heat treatment at 600oC to 800oC and this process is to burn in furnace.
Next
,
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bottles
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come
out to two
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different
types, new liquid
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glass
and recycled liquid
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glass
, then it
is shaped
in
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glass
Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.
mould
. In the final
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stage
, those
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bottles
are made
with
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many
labels with products packed in, and they
are sold
in a chain of supermarkets.
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IELTS essay The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
163 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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