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The picture below shows a place in 1980 and after the construction of a hydroelectric dam in 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture below shows a place in 1980 and after the construction of a hydroelectric dam in 1990. jeow
The layout illustrates how an area was in 1980 and than after built a hydroelectric dam on river in 1990. Overall, myriad of changes seen in area. New technical developments was noticed in particular area. In 1980, before the construction of dam forests were the best side of the river. There was a river flowing form north to south from the mountains. The architecture was noticed in the western side. Around the structure rare plants and animals were there. In the east side of the river irrigated land was developed. Furthermore, a small village was also witnessed. In 1990, lots of changes seen in the cost of nature. The river was became more large in width. More over, fishing facilitie was new developed. In the southern side, on the river new hydro-electric dam was eracted. Infact, new electric towers were etablished in the vest south part. Village was shiffed in the south east part. Inigated land was removed and new hotal was constructed. So, there were new drastic improvements seen after construction of dam in 1990.
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after built a hydroelectric
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dam
on
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in 1990.
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, myriad of
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changes
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area. In 1980,
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before
the construction of
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dam
forests were the best side of the
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river
. There was a
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river
flowing form north to south from the mountains. The architecture
was noticed
in the western side. Around the structure rare plants and animals were there. In the east side of the
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river
irrigated land
was developed
.
Furthermore
, a
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small
village was
also
witnessed. In 1990, lots of
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changes
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seen
in the cost of nature. The
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river
was
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became
more large in width. More over, fishing
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facilitie
was
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new
developed. In the southern side, on the
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river
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new
hydro-electric
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dam
was
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eracted
.
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new
electric towers were
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etablished
in the vest south part. Village was
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shiffed
in the
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south east
part.
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land
was removed
and
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new
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hotal
was constructed
.
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, there were
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drastic improvements
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after construction of
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dam
in 1990.

IELTS essay The picture below shows a place in 1980 and after the construction of a hydroelectric dam in 1990.

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  American English
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176 words
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