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The most livable city in Vietnam

The most livable city in Vietnam E7m53
Quang ngai is, in my opinion, Vietnam's most livable city. The people here are very friendly and get along with everyone. There is a long-standing culture here, such as the Sa Huynh cultural tourist area, as well as traces of ancient culture, such as Chau Sa ancient citadel, Go Vang, and so on. The weather is pleasant, and it will reassure and delight you. I believe you should visit here at least once since you will feel calm and find many interesting things to do.
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IELTS essay The most livable city in Vietnam

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