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The most important year in my life was this year, when I finished school and chose my future profession.

The most important year in my life was this year, when I finished school and chose my future profession. 2aO1w
Well, picking an important year was bit header as so many important events took place in different years in my life. However, out of those, I would like to talk about the year 2002 which I consider as one of the most important years in my life. I was not only excited about finishing my school but also nervous at the same time because I just didn’t know what kind of profession I was going to choose after ending my formal educational life. Until this year, my parents often recommended different professions to me, but later I made the final choice.
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IELTS essay The most important year in my life was this year, when I finished school and chose my future profession.

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  American English
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101 words
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