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The most common mistakes that people make when they are learning how to snowboard.

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Many people make some common mistakes when learning how to snowboard. They may think snowboarding is easy and many beginners don't even care about the course. Also, they didn't do exercises to make their legs stronger or buy any suitable clothes. In addition, they also try to attach the snowboard to their feet while standing. The most serious problem is that they reach out their hands to protect themselves when they fall as this can cause wrist injuries. Finally, there are still many people who do not bend their knees and look down at the skis.
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IELTS essay The most common mistakes that people make when they are learning how to snowboard.

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