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The media should stop reporting details of crimes to the public because it only has negative influences on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

The media should stop reporting details of crimes to the public because it only has negative influences on them. DloAj
Some person thinks that television should stop reporting lawlessness to the public because it has been negative on audiences. I hold that it would be arbitrary to take a superficial view and conclude that the news should become to a halt. It believes that the coverage reporting minutiae of scandal to the public may hurt the mass. However, reporting the misdeeds to the public also has positive aspects. That antisocial behaviour details to the public are conducive to raising the public's alertness and safety awareness, thus reducing the possibility of being killed. For example, last year, Since a girl was killed by a ride on a ride-hailing program booked by a taxi-hailing. Many taxi-hailing operating companies pay attention to select the driver and improved the taxi-hailing system, adding real-time positioning, recording, and dialling emergency contact numbers, to provide the public with a safe and secure ride. At the same time, after learning about the report, more crowd, especially women, will try their best to reduce going out alone at night, carry alarm equipment with them, and be alert and aware of taking a taxi. Though, reporting the crime to the public brings some drawbacks to the mass, which also provides an essential anti-scandal experience and enhances folk's ability to prevent the violation. The purpose of reporting a trivial matter of misdemeanour is to give the public the right to know the whole truth. If the media stops crimes, it will perpetuate an ignorant and dangerous environment for the citizens, with many serious consequences. First of all, the radio's behaviour of not telling the public the truth of the event infringes people's right to know. Some bureaucrats use their power to sweep that under the carpet. That makes the people blinded by the incomplete information reported by the media, and it is easy to form incorrect values. Besides, there are deeper social problems behind some criminals. If the government does not understand and focus on these social problems, there will be more tragedies like this, and people will be in danger all the time. To sum up, it is wrong for televisions to stop reporting wrongdoing to the public because it infringes on the public's own rights and puts the man and the whole society in unknown danger. Since the minutiae of violation play a role, both the media and the relevant government departments should be more open to the mass, and use this essential information to prevent a similar atrocity.
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person
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that television should
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stop
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reporting
lawlessness to the
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public
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because
it has been
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negative
on audiences. I hold that it would be arbitrary to take a superficial view and conclude that the news should become to a halt.

It believes that the coverage
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reporting
minutiae of scandal to the
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public
may hurt the mass.
However
,
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reporting
the misdeeds to the
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public
also
has
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positive
aspects. That antisocial
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behaviour
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details
to the
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public
are conducive to raising the public's alertness and safety awareness,
thus
reducing the possibility of
being killed
.
For example
, last year, Since a girl
was killed
by a ride on a ride-hailing program booked by a taxi-hailing.

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Many
taxi-hailing operating
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companies
pay attention to select the driver and
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improved
the taxi-hailing system, adding real-time positioning, recording, and
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dialling
emergency contact numbers,

to provide the
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public
with a safe and secure ride.

At the same time, after learning about the report, more crowd,
especially
women, will try their best to
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reduce
going out alone at night, carry alarm equipment with them, and be alert and aware of taking a taxi.

Though,
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reporting
the crime to the
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public
brings
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some
drawbacks to the mass, which
also
provides an essential anti-scandal experience and enhances folk's ability to
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prevent
the violation. The purpose of
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reporting
a trivial matter of
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misdemeanour
is to give the
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public
the right to know the whole truth. If the media
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stops
crimes, it will perpetuate an ignorant and
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dangerous
environment for the citizens, with
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many
serious consequences.
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First of all
, the radio's
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behaviour
of not telling the
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public
the truth of the
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event
infringes
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people
's right to know.
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Some
bureaucrats
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use
their power to sweep that under the carpet. That
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makes
the
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people
blinded by the incomplete information reported by the media, and it is easy to form incorrect values.
Besides
, there are deeper social problems behind
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some
criminals. If the
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government
does not understand and focus on these social problems, there will be more tragedies like this, and
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people
will be in
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danger
all the time.

To sum up, it is
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wrong
for televisions to
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stop
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reporting
wrongdoing to the
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public
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because
it infringes on the public's
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own
rights and puts the
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man
and the whole society in unknown
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danger
. Since the minutiae of violation play a role, both the media and the relevant
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government
departments should be more open to the mass, and
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use
this essential information to
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prevent
a similar atrocity.
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IELTS essay The media should stop reporting details of crimes to the public because it only has negative influences on them.

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