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The material discusses the concept of asteroids colonization.

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The material discusses the concept of asteroids colonization. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage. First, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely asteroids' low gravity makes landing and taking off are easy. Next, colonization on asteroids is beneficial because of the availability of valuable metals there. Finally, it is very easy to reach asteroids since they are close to the earth. Conversely, the lecture challenges the points, one specific contradiction is asteroids' low gravity has risks, because it reduces muscle mass and bone density. Consequently, the low gravity could have health problems that could affect long term colonization. In addition to that, the availability of precious metals has an additional factor; the cost to support colonization could be very high; which reduces its benefits. As a result, the cost of selling the metal may not be beneficial. One final point, it is easy to reach asteroids, but it is not easy to return given that asteroids are moveable, so they may not stay close to the earth, they could move far from it. Therefore, moving further away could make trouble, because asteroids may go that far that would be a challenge.
The material discusses the concept of
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asteroids
colonization. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain
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points
outlined in the reading passage.

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, the reading
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details
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points
regarding this topic,
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asteroids' low gravity
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makes
landing and taking off are
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easy
.
Next
, colonization on
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asteroids
is beneficial
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because
of the availability of valuable metals there.
Finally
, it is
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very
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easy
to reach
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asteroids
since they are close to the earth.

Conversely
, the lecture challenges the
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points
, one specific contradiction is asteroids' low gravity has
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risks
,
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because
it
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reduces
muscle mass and bone density.
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, the low gravity could have health problems that could affect long term colonization.
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to that, the availability of precious metals has an additional factor; the cost to support colonization could be
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high; which
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reduces
its benefits.
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, the cost of selling the metal may not be beneficial. One final
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point
, it is
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easy
to reach
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asteroids
,
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but
it is not
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easy
to return
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asteroids
are moveable,
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so
they may not stay close to the earth, they could
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move
far from it.
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further
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make
trouble,
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may go that far that would be a challenge.
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IELTS essay The material discusses the concept of asteroids colonization.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
207 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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