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The maps show the Petwood House now and planned refurbishment in the future

The maps show the Petwood House now and planned refurbishment in the future pemVD
The cross-sectional maps provide data about the Petwood House now and planned refurbishment for Petwood House in the future. Overall, it can be seen that the Petwood House has undergone significant development over the period, with the addition of more rooms and the basement. Looking at the first map in more detail, it can be seen that there are three floors. On the top floor, there are two attics where are store the objects situate on the left and the right. On the second floor, there are two bedrooms which are separated by a corridor. In the left at the same floor, there is a bedroom and the next room is a shower room. Furthermore, on the ground floor, there are two rooms include bathroom and living room which are situate next a bathroom on the left of these floor. Opposite these, there is a kitchen and even there is a garage which are situate outside of the house. Moving on the planned refurbishment of Petwood House, there will be four floors in the future. On the top floor, the attics for storage will be replaced by the bathroom in the left and the bedroom in the right of the house. In addition, on the second floor, the bedroom will be transformed to a study room. The shower and the bedroom in the left of the second floor will be remain unchanged. On the ground floor, the living room is planned to double in size, while the bathroom will be demolished. In addition, on the right of the floor, the storage will be added in the garage and the kitchen is remained unchanged. Finally, At the basement, there will be a games room where will be spent on entertainment.
The cross-sectional maps provide data about the
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Overall
, it can be
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seen
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has undergone significant development over the period, with the addition of more
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rooms
and the basement.

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seen
that there are three
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. On the top
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, there are two attics where are store the objects situate on the
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left
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, there are two
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bedrooms
which
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, there is a
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and the
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is a shower
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, there are two
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and living
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. Opposite these, there is a kitchen and even there is a garage which are
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. The shower and the
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will be
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, the living
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is planned
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where will
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IELTS essay The maps show the Petwood House now and planned refurbishment in the future

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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