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The majority of people prefer living in a large city because of tremendous opportunities than living in countryside. Herewith being aware of all risks of living in big cities such as losing your health or giving away a part of your life of being stuck in traffic jams. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities?

The majority of people prefer living in a large city because of tremendous opportunities than living in countryside. Herewith being aware of all risks of living in big cities such as losing your health or giving away a part of your life of being stuck in traffic jams. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities? n6BYR

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