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It is argued that newspaper and books will become old-establish and people will be able to read all information on the internet. It seems to me it is much more reliable and useful to read news or articles from published form.

It is argued that newspaper and books will become old-establish and people will be able to read all information on the internet. It seems to me it is much more reliable and useful to read news or articles from published form. E3jBR
It is argued that newspaper and books will become old-establish and people will be able to read all information on the internet. It seems to me it is much more reliable and useful to read news or articles from published form. Firstly, a myriad of people still prefer read information from printed materials rather than to read them on the phone or computer which in our today`s life called hi-tech world. We see this way, it is much easier to read word off a page instead of a screen. Secondly, it is concerns with health which exposing their eyes to phone screen can damage their ability to see. As a result, in many cases people`s ability to see deteriorates, especially in the middle ages which tends to read magazines on their phones. Finally, reading online news is much more unreliable now due to the availability of various sites. Many people pour all kind of unsafe and injurious information to make money or collect like. Admittedly, people make more use of the news and can easily download books on the internet as the cost of printing is deducted and makes them cheaper. In addition, almost all publishing companies have blogs that publish daily news, as well as many websites where books can be easily downloaded. However, reading printed publications is usually a perennial and enjoyable hobby of many enthusiastic readers in their spare time. In conclusion I believe that online newspapers may replace widespread newspapers in the future, but I believe that people will continue to use printed books and other types of documents.
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people
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read
all information on the internet. It seems to me it is much more reliable and useful to
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news
or articles from published form.

Firstly
, a myriad of
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people
still
prefer
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read
information from printed materials
rather
than to
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read
them on the phone or computer which in our
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today`s
life called hi-tech world. We
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see
this way, it is much easier to
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read
word off a page
instead
of a screen.
Secondly
, it is concerns with health which exposing their eyes to phone screen can damage their ability to
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see
.
As a result
, in
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cases
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people`s
ability to
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see
deteriorates,
especially
in the
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middle ages
which tends to
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read
magazines on their phones.
Finally
, reading online
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news
is much more unreliable
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now
due to the availability of various sites.
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Many
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people
pour all kind of unsafe and injurious information to
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make
money or collect like.

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,
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people
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make
more
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of the
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news
and can
easily
download
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books
on the internet as the cost of printing
is deducted
and
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makes
them cheaper.
In addition
, almost all publishing
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companies
have blogs that publish daily
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news
,
as well
as
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many
websites where
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books
can be
easily
downloaded.
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, reading printed publications is
usually
a perennial and enjoyable hobby of
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many
enthusiastic readers in their spare time.

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people
will continue to
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use
printed
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books
and other types of documents.
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IELTS essay It is argued that newspaper and books will become old-establish and people will be able to read all information on the internet. It seems to me it is much more reliable and useful to read news or articles from published form.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
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